The Storypath system [Draft Manuscript Preview #2]
11 months ago
– Fri, Aug 29, 2025 at 08:21:47 AM
Hello Monsters,
A great first day! We funded the project, announced our first Stretch Goal, and shared the first Monster Kingdoms travelogue!
If you missed any of that, you can check out our updates in the Community section of the Crowdfunding page!
Today's update may be just as fun! Because I've got our next section of the draft manuscript for backers, this time looking at the Storypath system, which are the rules that run the Monster Kingdoms game!
But first, speaking about that Stretch Goal we announced yesterday...


A great first day! We funded the project, announced our first Stretch Goal, and shared the first Monster Kingdoms travelogue!
If you missed any of that, you can check out our updates in the Community section of the Crowdfunding page!
Today's update may be just as fun! Because I've got our next section of the draft manuscript for backers, this time looking at the Storypath system, which are the rules that run the Monster Kingdoms game!
But first, speaking about that Stretch Goal we announced yesterday...


Achieved! - At $20,000 - NEW ADD ON: STORYGUIDE SCREEN
NEW ADD ON: STORYGUIDE SCREEN - A three-panel Storyguide Reference Screen with charts and information for running a Monster Kingdoms game will be created and offered as an Add On to any hardcover reward tiers for +$25.
We have achieved this Stretch Goal and unlocked this new Add On!

If you have pledged to one of the hardcover reward tiers, you can opt to "MANAGE YOUR PLEDGE" on the top or right side of the page and then "EDIT PLEDGE" to re-select your pledge tier and add this new Add On if you wish. You'll be able to update your pledge right up until the end, and all Add Ons will be available to select later in the Pledge Manager as well.
That means we need a new target to hunt!

At $30,000 - READY-MADE CHARACTERS PDF
READY-MADE CHARACTERS PDF - Do you want to game but your players aren’t sure what to play? Looking for inspiration to get you into the world of Monster Kingdoms? These five characters cover a range of Kingdoms, Mantles, and Dusks are ready to make their mark in the Monster Kingdoms! This PDF will be added to the rewards list of all backers receiving the Monster Kingdoms PDF as one of their rewards.

Draft Manuscript Previews
Over the course of the next 4 weeks, backers will receive the entire current draft manuscript for Monster Kingdoms, but it's not going to come to you all in one go. The previews will come out in monster-sized sections throughout the campaign. This helps me seem interesting over the next several weeks, but it's more about guiding the conversation and helping steer feedback for the developers.
Because they want your feedback! These manuscript previews are of the current draft manuscript – the document in its latest, approved form. This may not be the final form after editing and any additional development, but you can consider it about 95% finished, so keep that in mind.
Because they want your feedback! These manuscript previews are of the current draft manuscript – the document in its latest, approved form. This may not be the final form after editing and any additional development, but you can consider it about 95% finished, so keep that in mind.
In fact, you can help guide the team through the next stages of development by providing feedback on these manuscript previews! The Onyx Path team has set up a special Feedback Form just for campaign backers for this very purpose: https://forms.gle/TpaaPsUqJ79zD1kE6

You can use this Feedback Form to share your thoughts directly with the Monster Kingdoms creative team to help guide them through the next rounds of development and editing.
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